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12-06-2009
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Llama
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Noemie´s first shoot... sexy ;-)
Hi there, I want to show you the result of yesterdays shooting with Noémie... a normal teenager... and here first shooting... I like it
 The last one was Noemie with here sister  __________________
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12-07-2009
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Dromedary
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Re: Noemie´s first shoot... sexy ;-)
These are very well done. On the last one your DOF is shallow and not everything is in focus. I assume you intended it to be that way but I would liked to have seen it all in focus.
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12-07-2009
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Re: Noemie´s first shoot... sexy ;-)
Great series of images.....only little nit would be the last image....the hand with the fingers spread as well as the broad back of the hand takes your attention away from the subjects.
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12-07-2009
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Re: Noemie´s first shoot... sexy ;-)
Really nice series. I like them a lot. I will say that the first shot, at first glance, is a bit odd with your posing stool appearing to be coming out of her butt (or perhaps in). I think, for me, it is because of the light background, the light stool, and the light clothing. I guess I saw the "pole" before I saw the seat. Perhaps a crop or burning the seat a bit in PS could lessen this look.....for what its worth. It could just be me!
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12-07-2009
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Llama
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Re: Noemie´s first shoot... sexy ;-)
You always do nice work, and I really like the last one the best!!!
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12-07-2009
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Re: Noemie´s first shoot... sexy ;-)
3 & 5 stick out for me. Nicely done.
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12-07-2009
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Dromedary
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Re: Noemie´s first shoot... sexy ;-)
A nice series. #s 6 & 7 stand out most to me. Particularly like the poses and lighting on those.
Small point, but I'd suggest these may better suit the "fashion/models" forum. (No big deal, just a question of finding your audience  ). |
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12-07-2009
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Re: Noemie´s first shoot... sexy ;-)
I like the second and third from the last(no numbers so I might have this wrong., but I agree the eyes aren't tack sharp and I wonder if that's a compression for web thing or just missed focus.
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