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Old 11-19-2009   #1
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Old 11-20-2009   #2
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Old 11-20-2009   #3
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I'd hope C&C is welcome, as you posted it in the C&C forum

My C&C is that your hair? light is completely blown out. The light on the back right side of the subject. Nothing going on for catch lights but that didn't lead to raccoon eyes but a lack of detail in the face and eyes. Maybe the light was too low or too high to get in the eyes? His left check seems blown out and his right check seems to have freckles but for some reason lacks detail so hard to see. Not sure why.

The background is cool tho >_<
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Old 11-20-2009   #4
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Many thanks for your time. I still have some way to go. Its taken on board and hopefully i'll get it right next time.

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Many thanks for your time. I still have some way to go. Its taken on board and hopefully i'll get it right next time.

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Oh, and I forgot to mention I really love the composition and the setup of the shot.
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Old 11-20-2009   #7
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Thanks Kewk. It means I will be doing what you said, like the lighting being to high and turning the power down on the hair light. It was good advice.
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I like the concept of this shot, I like the use of lights. There are a few technical things that could be changed to improve this good image. Patrick listed off a few.

What lens did you use for this shot?
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Old 11-20-2009   #9
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The fill light exposure is under by about 1 stop or so. Had there been proper fill the black shadows under the guitar and under the fingers of his right hand would have detail in them rather than black areas of nothingness. The kicker light is way overexposed and the background light is nearly so. The fingers of his left hand are overexposed, three by the kicker and one by the too broad main light. Flag the main light so as not to encroach onto his fingers.

Thank you that he is not giving us "the finger" ( a "C" cord I believe.) Too many times I see guitarists doing this and photographers shooting it. Expression is so so. I like the composition.

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Wow, thanks for that in depth explanation, its much appreciated. Hopefully i might get a worthy image next time.
Many thanks for your time.
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Is that a real wall paint job? Definitely makes for a nice background!
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I like the comp and the post work.


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