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This is only my 2nd maternity session. I just have one off camera flash with an umbrella and a reflector.
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Great job; I really like that last one.
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Any suggestions on these? Are they that bad? I'm really trying to learn lighting and would love some C&C.
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Ok i am very Newbie to this so take most of what i say with a grain of salt but to me you could really benefit either from a lighter background or a Hair light. His hair in the Football shot seems to blend in a lot and hers on some of the others does as well. I really like the Black and white conversion because i think that shows the contrast in the hair and the dark background at least for her, not so much for him. I would love that last shot if the Shirt was not the same color as the background cause this way it almost seems like a floating head and hand.

Still all in all Great series.


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