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Old 11-29-2008   #1
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Hello All,

Well heres one from a shoot I had today. Melissa was a real pleasure to work with. As always any and all C&C more then welcome.

Edit: Reworked the image, She has such great skin it's really easy to make it looked over proccesed.


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Old 11-29-2008   #2
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Melissa is beautiful and so is the image of her. You did well. Cheers, Bill P.
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I think I'm gonna have to see more of the series to make a full critique.

She looks good and the photo looks good.

I can tell that the right lower corner is white on her coat, but it does sort of grab for attention.

Beautiful.

Love the skin-not overprocessed.
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Thanks Bill,

Fran ask and ye shall receive, heres one more for you....
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They are both quite good; I like the skin tones and composition better on the second one.
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The only nit pick on the 1st one is the 2nd one is even better! Great work. Have some K.
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Both are good. I like the hair and sweater in the second.
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Even better I agree.
But clearly I said series
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Thanks all, I'm going to revist that first one.

Fran, ok here two more and thats it!! Gonna have to ween you off this stuff sometime.
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Oh Man! The second one is just awesome !!! Edit: After a second look I have to say that her neck does look strained. I would try to either clone from the good skin and overlay (but that's difficult) or just clone a bit from her pullover and cover that area. This one must be saved - its too good!

The last two are nice but a bit overcooked in PP IMHO.


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