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Old 11-05-2008   #1
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Heres my brother by the window. I really like this shot and I'm curious, what do you think?



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Love it! Have some "K"!
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That came out awesome Michele!! I'm not sure if you used the sepia or not but really nice Processing

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It came out really nice. If you don't mind me asking- what process did you use for this shot?
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Wonderful shot! Love the processing too.
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It is a very pensive portrait...thought provoking, dreamy kind of look...warm tones and it probably captures the love you feel for your brother.
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Ok I have been lurking long enough at you and Jay's work. This is very very nice only nit pick I have is with the frame of the window being a dominant feature over his right shoulder and the way the light is hitting it I feel like he is falling out the window or going to fall out. I don't know if the picture would be as powerful rotated a little to the right but that's just my 2 cents. I know if you show your brother he wouldn't even notice. Again I love the lighting and feel just a little nit pick.

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I like it, Michele.
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Nice, but ifeel it would be better if the vertical lines were vertical instead of tilted:

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There is not enough room to do a perspective crop so I just tilted it.


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