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Old 09-18-2008   #1
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Old 09-18-2008   #2
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Blown out highlights, but the ideas are good.
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Old 09-18-2008   #3
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Agree with above.
On the second, while a fan of negative space, I would have moved to the left to include her whole hand and less neg space on right.
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Old 09-18-2008   #4
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Wonder what #2 looks like in color? (hint! lol)

All those flowers...I bet it's pretty in color. (another hint)
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I too, would love to see the second one in color
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Old 09-19-2008   #6
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Like the color one a little better.
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The color version is very nice
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I like that color version too!

On the composition - she needs to be not as close to the edge as she is, on the bench. And be careful of the hyperextended elbow when leaning on it.

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Like the color one a little better.
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