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Old 01-02-2007   #1 (permalink)
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Conceptually I think it's great. The bottom half of the portrait draws me in much more than the top half. Personally, I'd like to see more light coming from behind her head so that her hair doesn't get lost in the background. More contrast on her face might be good too.
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Hi Bart Boodts,

First a Welcome to the Camel!

I like the image, the only ting *I* would do is tone down the highlights on her right (upper) hand a bit. The spot is so hot, it attracts attention 'on his own' IMHO, toning down to the brightness level found on her left (lower) hand would avoid that, IMHO, makes the image/lightstreaks more balanced.

...and I very much enjoyed your PBase website, thanks for sharing your views!

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