PhotoCamel: Your friendly photo community, with free discussion forums, digital photography reviews, photo sharing, galleries, downloads, blogs, photography contests, and prizes.
Photo of the Week Photo of the Week

Go Back   PhotoCamel - Your Friendly Photo Community > Photography by Genre: Critique and Discussion > Portraits / People

Reply
 
LinkBack Thread Tools Display Modes
Old 11-24-2006   #1 (permalink)
Vicuna
 
sueanne's Avatar
 
Location: USA
Posts: 101
sueanne will become famous soon enough
CamelKarma: 22
Default My daughter

This is one I took in low light, lamp 'on' in the corner.

I like the warm colors but there are some that prefer cooler colors....
[img width=800 height=533]http://www.pbase.com/sueymarky/image/70668080/original.jpg[img][/img]

Thanks for looking *

__________________
__________________
Members don't see this ad. Register your free account today and become a member on PhotoCamel - Your Friendly Photo Community, gaining access to posting privileges, contests, free plug-ins and other downloads, unlimited online storage for your photographs, reviews, free marketplace listings, and much more.
__________________
sue anne
sueanne is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 11-24-2006   #2 (permalink)
F1 Camel
 
felix.reichardt's Avatar
 
Posts: 3,382
felix.reichardt strides over the forum like a knight in shining armorfelix.reichardt strides over the forum like a knight in shining armorfelix.reichardt strides over the forum like a knight in shining armorfelix.reichardt strides over the forum like a knight in shining armorfelix.reichardt strides over the forum like a knight in shining armorfelix.reichardt strides over the forum like a knight in shining armorfelix.reichardt strides over the forum like a knight in shining armorfelix.reichardt strides over the forum like a knight in shining armorfelix.reichardt strides over the forum like a knight in shining armorfelix.reichardt strides over the forum like a knight in shining armorfelix.reichardt strides over the forum like a knight in shining armor
CamelKarma: 4066
Editing OK?: No
Default Re: My daughter

Warm colors are nice but I think removing the green cast would help to improve this nice picture a lot IMHO.

Nice picture anyway. She looks very serious about her music - nice capture.

Cheers
__________________
I wish I could but I don't want to ...

C&C appreciated - please do not edit my photos, Thanks

http://flickr.com/photos/felixreichardt/sets/
felix.reichardt is online now   Reply With Quote
Old 11-24-2006   #3 (permalink)
Russ Holmes
 
FocusingOnFlorida's Avatar
 
Location: Florida
Posts: 4,719
FocusingOnFlorida has a reputation beyond reputeFocusingOnFlorida has a reputation beyond reputeFocusingOnFlorida has a reputation beyond reputeFocusingOnFlorida has a reputation beyond reputeFocusingOnFlorida has a reputation beyond repute
CamelKarma: 425
Editing OK?: Yes
Default Re: My daughter

Very nice sueanne. Great use of DoF. That's not an engagement ring on her hand is it?
__________________
Russell Holmes

Web - http://www.focusingonflorida.com
MySpace - http://www.myspace.com/russellholmesphotography

editing allowed, comments always welcome!
FocusingOnFlorida is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 11-24-2006   #4 (permalink)
Alpaca
 
Posts: 37
Jules will become famous soon enough
CamelKarma: 11
Default Re: My daughter

I love warm colors and always have. *Is this a digital photo? *If so, what was the setting for WB? *[I'm just getting into digital but I think the WB setting has to do with coloror warmth, among other things.]

As for the photo, the shallow depth of field makes it very special, and your daughter is beautiful.

Thank you.
__________________
Jules
Jules is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 11-24-2006   #5 (permalink)
Photocamel Master
 
Padre's Avatar
 
Location: Memphis, TN.
Posts: 5,338
Padre strides over the forum like a knight in shining armorPadre strides over the forum like a knight in shining armorPadre strides over the forum like a knight in shining armorPadre strides over the forum like a knight in shining armorPadre strides over the forum like a knight in shining armorPadre strides over the forum like a knight in shining armorPadre strides over the forum like a knight in shining armorPadre strides over the forum like a knight in shining armorPadre strides over the forum like a knight in shining armor
CamelKarma: 1261
Editing OK?: Yes
Default Re: My daughter

She is very cute Suanne. I think the warm tones work ok but I might do some selective desaturation on her face and the violin to even the image out a bit.
__________________
Best Regards, Brent
My images http://www.pbase.com/bpowell
Padre is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 11-24-2006   #6 (permalink)
F1 Camel
 
Shortie's Avatar
 
Posts: 4,920
Shortie is a jewel in the rough
CamelKarma: 41
Default Re: My daughter

very cute

it is a keeper in my eyes

Well done

Shortie
__________________
Editing Allowed

No trees were harmed in the posting of this message, but a few electrons were mildly inconvenienced.
Shortie is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 11-24-2006   #7 (permalink)
Dromedary
 
Location: Indiana
Posts: 1,399
Stormdancing has a reputation beyond reputeStormdancing has a reputation beyond reputeStormdancing has a reputation beyond repute
CamelKarma: 215
Default Re: My daughter

Very nice! I love the DOF on this shot. After adjusting the white balance as suggested, I would also clone out the pink thing on the wall and the partial frame of the picture on the right. It's just clutter in an otherwise great shot. The white on the left looks like a beam of light shining down on her hand and I would leave that.
__________________
**You may edit or enhance any of my photos posted here***
**Critique and suggestions are always welcome and appreciated, be it good or bad.**
Dana
http://gallery.heartsfire.com
Stormdancing is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 11-24-2006   #8 (permalink)
Vicuna
 
sueanne's Avatar
 
Location: USA
Posts: 101
sueanne will become famous soon enough
CamelKarma: 22
Default Re: My daughter

Thank you felix,

I didn't notice the green cast as much as the overage 'warm' colors, maybe green from her shirt...

Thanks, will try the green cast removal.


Quote:
Originally Posted by felix.reichardt
Warm colors are nice but I think removing the green cast would help to improve this nice picture a lot IMHO.

Nice picture anyway. She looks very serious about her music - nice capture.

Cheers
__________________
sue anne
sueanne is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 11-24-2006   #9 (permalink)
Vicuna
 
sueanne's Avatar
 
Location: USA
Posts: 101
sueanne will become famous soon enough
CamelKarma: 22
Default Re: My daughter

Thank you Russ*

LOL no that is just a simple 'play' ring.

Quote:
Originally Posted by FocusingOnFlorida
Very nice sueanne. Great use of DoF. That's not an engagement ring on her hand is it?
__________________
sue anne
sueanne is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 11-24-2006   #10 (permalink)
Vicuna
 
sueanne's Avatar
 
Location: USA
Posts: 101
sueanne will become famous soon enough
CamelKarma: 22
Default Re: My daughter

Thank you Padre,

Will try some selective desaturation on the face and violin - its back to the pp'ing.

Quote:
Originally Posted by Padre
She is very cute Suanne. I think the warm tones work ok but I might do some selective desaturation on her face and the violin to even the image out a bit.
__________________
sue anne
sueanne is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 11-24-2006   #11 (permalink)
Vicuna
 
sueanne's Avatar
 
Location: USA
Posts: 101
sueanne will become famous soon enough
CamelKarma: 22
Default Re: My daughter

Jules,

This is from 350D, yes digital photo. I just used 'auto' WB - shot in JPEG ISO 800.

Thank you for your liking it

Quote:
Originally Posted by Jules
I love warm colors and always have. Is this a digital photo? If so, what was the setting for WB? [I'm just getting into digital but I think the WB setting has to do with coloror warmth, among other things.]

As for the photo, the shallow depth of field makes it very special, and your daughter is beautiful.

Thank you.
__________________
sue anne
sueanne is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 11-24-2006   #12 (permalink)
Vicuna
 
sueanne's Avatar
 
Location: USA
Posts: 101
sueanne will become famous soon enough
CamelKarma: 22
Default Re: My daughter

Thank you Stormdancing.

Ah yes will keep all these tips in mind and go work on the pp'ing.
It's a good thing cloning can be done ....

I appreciate all the tips and pp help.

Quote:
Originally Posted by Stormdancing
Very nice! I love the DOF on this shot. After adjusting the white balance as suggested, I would also clone out the pink thing on the wall and the partial frame of the picture on the right. It's just clutter in an otherwise great shot. The white on the left looks like a beam of light shining down on her hand and I would leave that.
__________________
sue anne
sueanne is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 11-24-2006   #13 (permalink)
Vicuna
 
sueanne's Avatar
 
Location: USA
Posts: 101
sueanne will become famous soon enough
CamelKarma: 22
Default Re: My daughter

Thank you Shortie

I like it too but will do some pp adjustments to a different view.

Quote:
Originally Posted by Shortie
very cute

it is a keeper in my eyes

Well done

Shortie
__________________
sue anne
sueanne is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 11-24-2006   #14 (permalink)
Llama
 
Posts: 897
dean1401 is a jewel in the rough
CamelKarma: 47
Default Re: My daughter

Love it!
It's these personal "keepers" that make photography unique.

Dean
dean1401 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 11-24-2006   #15 (permalink)
Vicuna
 
sueanne's Avatar
 
Location: USA
Posts: 101
sueanne will become famous soon enough
CamelKarma: 22
Default Re: My daughter

Thank you Dean

Yes, I printed it out for my photo album for a 'keeper'

Quote:
Originally Posted by dean1401
Love it!
It's these personal "keepers" that make photography unique.

Dean
__________________
sue anne
sueanne is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 11-24-2006   #16 (permalink)
Vicuna
 
sueanne's Avatar
 
Location: USA
Posts: 101
sueanne will become famous soon enough
CamelKarma: 22
Default Re: My daughter

I re-pp the picture, cloned out the distracting background and abit less saturation but not sure how to get the 'green cast' away. Thanks for all your tips and help*

[img width=800 height=533]http://www.pbase.com/sueymarky/image/70704172/original.jpg[img][/img]
__________________
sue anne
sueanne is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 11-24-2006   #17 (permalink)
Russ Holmes
 
FocusingOnFlorida's Avatar
 
Location: Florida
Posts: 4,719
FocusingOnFlorida has a reputation beyond reputeFocusingOnFlorida has a reputation beyond reputeFocusingOnFlorida has a reputation beyond reputeFocusingOnFlorida has a reputation beyond reputeFocusingOnFlorida has a reputation beyond repute
CamelKarma: 425
Editing OK?: Yes
Default Re: My daughter

Sueanne, try to adjust your color balance and add just a touch of blue. That will help negate some of the green. Then add a touch of red if you want to bring a bit of the warmth back.
__________________
Russell Holmes

Web - http://www.focusingonflorida.com
MySpace - http://www.myspace.com/russellholmesphotography

editing allowed, comments always welcome!
FocusingOnFlorida is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 11-24-2006   #18 (permalink)
Photocamel Master
 
Padre's Avatar
 
Location: Memphis, TN.
Posts: 5,338
Padre strides over the forum like a knight in shining armorPadre strides over the forum like a knight in shining armorPadre strides over the forum like a knight in shining armorPadre strides over the forum like a knight in shining armorPadre strides over the forum like a knight in shining armorPadre strides over the forum like a knight in shining armorPadre strides over the forum like a knight in shining armorPadre strides over the forum like a knight in shining armorPadre strides over the forum like a knight in shining armor
CamelKarma: 1261
Editing OK?: Yes
Default Re: My daughter

These are a couple of ways to remove the cast. *If using any photoshop You can:
1. Go to Image - Adjustments - and try auto color (this usually doesn't do a very good job however) Elements has Image - Ajustments - color cast which opens a dialogue box and gives you an eyedropper. *All you have to do is click on something netual, gray, black or white.
2. You could bring up curves - go to the green channel - pull the curve as you look at the image to reduce the amount of green
3. Most of the time setting levels correctly will solve a cast. *Open up the levels dialogue box. While holding down the ALT key, click on the right (highlights) eyedropper and set the white point at the threshold. Then do the same with the left (shadows) eyedropper.
If none of this makes sense to *you let me know. *
__________________
Best Regards, Brent
My images http://www.pbase.com/bpowell
Padre is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 11-25-2006