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Old 01-15-2018   #1
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My son - CC welcomed

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Old 01-16-2018   #2
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Very nice. I would clone out his knee that is protruding from his chest.

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Old 01-17-2018   #3
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Thank you for suggestion.
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Old 01-17-2018   #4
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Agree with Benji. The thing that got me first was the wall behind him that is on the right edge of the frame. Not a deal breaker, but if the background that is on the left of the image was also in that right side area, it would be better, I think...
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Old 01-22-2018   #5
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See if raising the black point up a tad makes a noticeable difference. For me the head size seems a bit too large for the format but that is just an opinion and we all have one.
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A very nice portrait.
I agree with Benji's recommendation.
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Old 01-25-2018   #7
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What did you use 200 mm?
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Old 01-27-2018   #8
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Thanks to all of you.

@compasiune11 canon ef 50mm 1.4 @f/2.0 on 450D, flash bounced off side wall
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I wouldn't change a thing.


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