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Old 12-03-2017   #1
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Old 01-08-2018   #2
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I always love these type of images. This one seems to be more grey and a b&w. Play with your post processing more to see if you can get the highlights a tad brighter.
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If you look at the histogram there are very few pixels at or above the midpoint which is exactly what is wanted for a low key image. That said I think too much of the body and head fade into the background. Since your main light is camera left perhaps a reflector or other minimal source for fill on the subject only on the right side, not the background, would give a bit better separation.
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Old 01-09-2018   #4
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If you look at the histogram there are very few pixels at or above the midpoint which is exactly what is wanted for a low key image. That said I think too much of the body and head fade into the background. Since your main light is camera left perhaps a reflector or other minimal source for fill on the subject only on the right side, not the background, would give a bit better separation.
I agree. But the BIG issue for me is that large blurred spot/area on the back of his hand!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 01-25-2018   #5
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The hand doesen't have even light. The black spot looks not so good.


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