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Old 11-07-2016   #1
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Weekend shoot with my twin nieces.
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That's a nice image and I especially like the lighting and background. I do wish the one on the left was looking at the cam or at least had her face up.
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Old 11-08-2016   #3
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Agree with Medowlark. Regardless a well composed photo. One nitpick the young lady on the right has two catch lights in her left eye.
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Oh my, I think this is precious. I'm really liking the whole thing, and wouldn't suggest any changes, personally. Very nice.
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Oh this is so sweet! I love the lighting and the fact that one is looking down and the other into the camera. But the best part is their sweet little hands!! Great shot!
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Just lovely!!!!!!!!!
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Old 12-23-2016   #7
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Very nice images. From a personal perspective I agree with a previous comment that I would have liked the left twin to have her head raised and looking at the camera.
Why: it is a pair of beautiful twins and both need camera eyeshot IMO. What did the parents think?

Still a lovely photo with good exposure and colour balance.
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Old 01-01-2017   #8
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Thank you everyone for your opinions.
I'm trying to get my feet wet with children photography.
Nothing beats their innocence.
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The posing of the hands and eyes suggests a lot about the relationship between these two fine models.
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Priceless photo. I would think the parents would be very pleased!!!


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