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Old 01-29-2008   #1 (permalink)
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Default Snell Recreation Photo - Reworked
Hi everyone! This photo I submitted to a challenge not long ago. I have reworked it based on some wonderful feedback. Did I improve it? Destroy it? Did I overdo it? Is there something I can do to make it better?

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Looks good. The thing I would do is take out the power pole on the horizon.
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Power pole gone! Thanks much for that Much better without it.
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Very good edit with removing the pole. You even left the tree branches on the skyline and there is not any trace of the pole removal. Kudos and karma to you!
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Well tried to Karma you but I have to do some spreading apparently before I can Karma you. Come on someone... give this Camel some Karma!
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I'd like to see more saturation in the sky and reflection, but that's just my opinion.
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hmmmm... sky looks quite blue on my monitor... as does the lake. Just compared it on 2 other monitors and it looks good on them as well. Hmmmmm.....
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Your shot proves there is beauty in the plains even in Winter! Great reflection on my monitor and I'll gladly pass on some Karma for a great shot like that!!!!!

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Nice shot! The left side isn't near as interesting as the center and right, so crop it on the left at the base of the second tree left side, then crop the bottom just enough to take out that little strand of grass at the bottom and see what you think.
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You might consider making a conversion to black and white, or even with a tone to give the image a completely different feel.
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Its looking good now.

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