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Old 08-11-2017   #1
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Old 08-12-2017   #2
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Lovely subject and colour.

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Old 08-13-2017   #3
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Great subject, I like the lighting but the image needs to be sharpened as its a tad soft.
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Old 08-13-2017   #4
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nice NICE composition!
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Old 08-15-2017   #5
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Hmmm...
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Old 08-15-2017   #6
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Of the two, I like the original version better. Its softness goes better with old-time nostalgia. If you backed off a bit on the sharpness of the revised version, it would be the more realistic of the two (or three).
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Old 08-16-2017   #7
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I'm afraid its oversharpened now which has introduced artifacts, just needs toning down
a bit or use selective sharpening on image.
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Old 08-18-2017   #8
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I like the softness of the first one better also. Looks a little more like a painting...


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