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Old 03-06-2017   #1
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Trying to do some stop motion images. Three speed lights all set at 128th of a second. two camera left through a defuser and one from below.

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Old 03-06-2017   #2
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Nice concept and efforts.
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Nice series of shots, how many eggs did you end up using! that last one is spot-on and that look of food in motion is real trendy at the moment.
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Well done, I'd say you nailed it.
Personally I'd prefer to see more of the hands at the top of #3
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I like all of them of the simple fact that I can't do that well, even after thinking and seeing examples. But you probably want an opinion, so... The first one shows the lighting, and the little bit of bright on the sleeve edge on what is your left hadn't bugs me. The second one your right arm is kind of bright and grabs me more than the bright stripe on the sifter. The last one I can agree that it needed more hands in it. or maybe no hands, but hands high like in the 2nd one would be better.

Still, and again, some very nice work and to freeze it and do it, very impressive.
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Im impressed, I like the outcome very much! Thx for posting-
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Nice series of shots, how many eggs did you end up using! that last one is spot-on and that look of food in motion is real trendy at the moment.
3 eggs total and lots of flower.
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I like the third photograph the best. In my opinion, I'd like to see more of your hands or not at all. Preferably more, so we could see all of the broken egg in your hands.

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Hi guys. I am a new member to this forum. Nice to meet you all here.


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