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Old 05-25-2008   #1
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One charming person to work with.

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As a novelty, almost no PS,only framing and output sharpening

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Old 05-25-2008   #2
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Very nice. She looks like she moves well without much direction. I think you have done a very good job with color balance. Most times the color is weighted by the background color resulting in a blue skin tone. The only one with a color cast in my view is the second one and it is just a slight shift.

Great job with a good model.
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Old 05-25-2008   #3
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Nicolas,

I love your style. And she is just lovely

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Old 05-25-2008   #4
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I love these. Are you gelling the gray bg to achieve the colored bg's?

2 and 4 stand out for me.
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Very nice, Nicolas.
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Nice series.
In #1 the bright white top draws my attention away from her face. Perhaps her face should be a little brighter by having a smaller amount of facial shadow.

In #4 perhaps the camera should be a little higher.

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I like all of these Nicolas, quite an achievement without PP. Lovely girl.
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I still have to get used to use less PP.

This is only possible whith perfect make-up and/or perfect skin, as i am back to working without an MUA

Yes, 1 to 5 are basic grey seamless paper, only gel'ed with a D-Lite 4

K's are welcome.

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I love #1 and #2.

My only comment would be to try to clone out the clear plastic bra strap in #2. And I know you did no PP (amazing!), but some skin smoothing might go a long way for her.

Just my opinion. This is great work!
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Hi Nicolas,

I like these a lot, and straight out of camera, got to be happy about that


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