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Old 05-11-2007   #1
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This is a first for me! all natual lighting! Placing her in the right light was a big challenge! I hope i got it right ! All C/C are welcome ! I need input on how to improve!
Thanks Lloyd.

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Well we can't comment on anything if we can't see the picture.
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The pictures look great to me!
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Old 05-11-2007   #4
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Nice shots! Pretty girl!
Only thing that I would comment on is in #1 it almost looks like she is in a strain....can't really put my finger on it.
On #4 I would crop just above the knee showing.
Whites of the eyes are a bit over done on some....really sings in #3....the white of her is on the shadow side of her face is way brighter than her other eye.

Just some of my thoughts.....

Cool images!

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WOW - they are excellent !!!!
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Absolutly wonderful, well done.
Love the eye you have for light and composition.
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Looks like you got it right the to me. Excellent photos.
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All natural light? Wow.

In the first, by the way, her right leg looks relaxed. The tension that I feel in her pose comes from her hand position. Did it give her forearms more deinition? i assume it was intentional.
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I don't know who chose the wardrobe, but, That Dress!
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Very nice .The exposure on these looks great, wonderful job.

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