Actual Fashion with Kyha
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Did this shoot as a TF favor to Kyha and her new business partner. The idea here was to actually sell the clothes.

Not sure how we did but I kept telling her DO NOT connect with the camera or nobody will notice anything but you. LOL



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and selling a necklace but Kyha shines through


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...imo some really good shots, but you really needed to get away from all those bricks! Just to busy and definitely fought with the clothes for attention. Also notice in #6 how the coat lapel folds over the necklace, small detail maybe, but important I think in a fashion shot. Me being a wildlife shooter and all commenting on fashion! LOL
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Nice series.
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Ah man... good advice on connecting with the camera, which worked, mostly. You got to get away from that door. The light blue color competes and distracts. The brown door isn't a lot better, but at least it is brown. The brick wall doesn't help in fashion, as tight as it in to the model. Get farther away from most things. best one is probably #9 because it has minimal background and some good separation, blur.

Sounded harsh when I re-read it, but you know how I mean it.
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Nice series. #3 for me. I think the bricks are fine but would be better with some bokeh.
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Thanks all.

Pickles you KNOW I don't offend easily (or at all). LOL


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