This Coke's For You Pin-Up Part 2
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Old 09-06-2017   #1
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A couple more from my summer pin-up series.

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You did a great job lighting these!
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nice series
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Nice set!

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Perfect concept and execution. first one is magazine ready.
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Thanks everyone for your kind comments. Steve, it would be nice to get a call from Coke.
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Great shots and yes the first one is fantastic!!!
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Not saying I have a shoe fetish but the full package would've been nice on the first capture, second image sort of makes up for the severe crop of the first. Nicely done.
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Great shots. Good luck with Coke!
My only critique...
Lighting on her face on the second photo...there is a shine on one cheek. (good) but lack of similar lighting on other cheek.
Lighted cheek looks feminine. As for the other cheek it her "jaw" bone is more prominent.
...Something to consider.
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A very nice series.


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