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Old 09-20-2017   #11
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Nice series, but if meant as period shots they missed. The hairdos are wrong for the clothing and style. On a more technical note there is a bright highlight on her back in the first photo.
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Old 09-23-2017   #12
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Not saying I have a shoe fetish but the full package would've been nice on the first capture, second image sort of makes up for the severe crop of the first. Nicely done.
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Great shots. Good luck with Coke!
My only critique...
Lighting on her face on the second photo...there is a shine on one cheek. (good) but lack of similar lighting on other cheek.
Lighted cheek looks feminine. As for the other cheek it her "jaw" bone is more prominent.
...Something to consider.
Thanks for your comments Augustine

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A very nice series.
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Nice series, but if meant as period shots they missed. The hairdos are wrong for the clothing and style. On a more technical note there is a bright highlight on her back in the first photo.
Thanks for your comments Didereaux

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Great shots and yes the first one is fantastic!!!
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