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![]() Recent shoot with Adrienne. Let me know what you think.
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![]() I love redheads and I like your lighting.
Suggestion re: poses though-- In 2 & 3 her hands are flat to the camera which tends toward the masculine. I tell my models to avoid the "catcher's mitt" and show me either side of the hand. Sometimes I actually take two images back to back to demonstrate it. That said, the clenched fist in 3 at least fits the concept. Overall, nice series. |
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![]() Like the lighting and color and like the comments too. Agree with Bilsen on the flat hands. I do think that #3 is the best, or at least it is the one I prefer. It has action and a feeling, and isn't so tight on the top and bottom of the frame. The last one is close, but not sure about the curled up tongue part. But in all, the lighting works well and you got that part figured out. Just tweak to poses and crop...
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![]() Thanks for all the great comments yous guys.
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