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Looking for feedback on these. Off camera flash was used in all of them but was supposed to be natural looking.
I'm curious as to which one you think is the best and why. Also if you want to include which one you like the least and why.
Thanks for looking!!

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Nice series.

#s 2 & 4 appear a bit soft, like the camera missed focus a tad.

The last one is well done but might be better with her not so centered.

1 & 5 are my favorites.
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I prefer the 3rd and 4th. The 4th suggests a likeable girl. The expressions in the others seem strained. The vivid flowers are a bit overwhelming. The first is my least favorite. The shoulders and hands could be posed better, and one wonders what she is looking at.
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Nice series.

#s 2 & 4 appear a bit soft, like the camera missed focus a tad.

The last one is well done but might be better with her not so centered.

1 & 5 are my favorites.
Thanks, I appreciate the feedback!
As for #5, I see your point, it troubled me as well, the reason she's not more to the left was because I didn't want more dead space to the right and I didn't want to crop out the window door on the left and I really liked it in the 4x6 ratio so decided to compromise for those reasons
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I prefer the 3rd and 4th. The 4th suggests a likeable girl. The expressions in the others seem strained. The vivid flowers are a bit overwhelming. The first is my least favorite. The shoulders and hands could be posed better, and one wonders what she is looking at.
Thanks for the input Jim.
I think #4 is her favorite as well
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Nice series.
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Nice series.
Thanks Shadow!
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I think #4 is the best as it looks the most natural.
Do not like #5 as it looks the most posed?


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