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Old 07-27-2017   #1
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One of my few remaining regulars, Adrianna has been in both swimsuit issues and, when she found out I'm not shooting one this year, she insisted on her own shoot. I didn't mind.



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3. I KNOW Lil hates the pulldown images but the models all seem to want them.


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7. I HATE flip flops but this is one of my favorite poses


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10. DO NOT blame me for the lipstick.

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Great set@!!
I love the pull down pose
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You added the shoes just for me, didn't ya? But that flip-flop nonsense doesn't count Sir...

And I will blame you for that lipstick, and not on my hit parade either.

On the more real side, not sure about the thigh/leg in #9 as the angle makes it look pretty wide... and 4 and 5 are pretty nice
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Nice series, the navel adornment is lost in the foliage in the first image, thankfully you included more so we could see the jewelry clearly.
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Thanks all.

Pickles, I KNEW you would be impressed we thought of you. EVEN with damn flip flops.
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Overall my thoughts are you should be extremely careful posing and lighting this model. She has multiple less than ideal features...#1 being her nose. So watch the angles and lighting on the face. also watch for odd folds and wrinkles...i/e #3 her hip facing the camera. And large feet #5 #9 Her buttock overhanging the under leg. ugh also that lower leg looks like it is a mismatched one PS'd in.

Hate to sound harsh, but that's what I am seeing.
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Thanks Dideraux.

All good suggestions for maximizing her look.
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A fine series, Steve. Also noted some fine images on your facebook page.
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10. DO NOT blame me for the lipstick.
ROFLMAO

Nice set. Thanks for sharing your work.


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