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Old 07-07-2017   #1
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A shot from a previous shoot. f/5.6, ISO 100, 1/200sec, flash.

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I kind of like this. I think there is too much negative space, but that is me. Also, might need something a bit brighter as the brightest piece is probably her eyes, which are closer to gray. Probably don't need to be white, but maybe 90% of the way. But I like it in B&W...
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I kind of like this. I think there is too much negative space, but that is me. Also, might need something a bit brighter as the brightest piece is probably her eyes, which are closer to gray. Probably don't need to be white, but maybe 90% of the way. But I like it in B&W...
Thanks for comments and critique, I was a bit concerned about getting a good white point, I knew I was kind of close and then thought I might have to back off a bit if I were to print the image.
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Nice one Shadow. I like the light falloff a lot.

Might crop a tad tighter but that's just me.
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Nice one Shadow. I like the light falloff a lot.

Might crop a tad tighter but that's just me.
Hi Steve,

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I agree with the others. I like the models eye contact with camera. The hair blends into the background so s little more light on her hair would have helped the image too but hey it could be my monitor. Nice job overall.
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I agree with the others. I like the models eye contact with camera. The hair blends into the background so s little more light on her hair would have helped the image too but hey it could be my monitor. Nice job overall.
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Great light, creates a nice moody feel to it. I'd like to see just a tad more of her right shoulder.
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Great light, creates a nice moody feel to it. I'd like to see just a tad more of her right shoulder.
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