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Old 04-20-2017   #1
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Yes your favorite nude model looks great in clothes too. This concept was actually inspired by my wife. Here Zoe recreates going TO work and the result when she gets home. Sadly, we forgot the mandatory glass of wine.



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6. Coming home is a bit different


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8. I asked her if dinner was ready -- here's the look she nailed


9. as something else different, we shot some natural light portraits. The only light is a HUGE bay window to camera right


10. before you jump me, those catchlights are off the glass of the table.


Mr. Pickles, there are shoes in these images just for you.

I'll put another more revealing Zoe set in Glamor. See y'all there.

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Nicely done, a bit tight on the crop except for 4, 6-8, 10.
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I think the "look" in #8 needs to be the same composition as #6. I think in #7 and #8 the camera dropped downward too much. I'd rather have the high-ish key look of the blinds.

And on #9 and #10, think they look better cropped square with her face? Like just drag up the bottom till the crop is square. Square might not be a "like" for you, but not sure the empty darkness is better. Just commenting really to make thinkable conversation.

She seems tall and doesn't need tall shoes.
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Nice shots of a beautiful model, Steve.
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really nicely done. I like them
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Nicely done. I like the concept of how the black and white outfit gives good contrast between subject and surroundings.
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Very nice shots! Was that just window light?
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Thanks Tiger.

Custom, other than the images on the couch, all ambient light. The couch was so backlit I needed to fill it.
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Very nice series; good job to both of you.


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