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Old 04-18-2017   #1
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It has been a really slow winter in Bilsen land but I have recovered with two gorgeous redheads in the last 2 weeks.

Lori does Arabian Nights, Mermaid and TrashGlam.



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Great shoot, nice to see you having fun again!!!
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A very nice series .
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Did she rip that expensive trash glam dress in the last one? It is okay if she is trying to be revealing and sexy, but come on Lori, you ruined the props.

I think most of these are some very nice images and you have nice color, so a plus for sure. The lighting falls off in some and creates dark and harsh shadows. Not sure that it is by design or just because you have one light (it seems). I think some need a reflector on camera left to kick some back in.

But I think I'd move the 2nd one to your best of collection, and keep her number handy because she looks "happy" in all. Doesn't look like she is bored or "working".

But no shoes.
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6 and 9 are my faves. I like how you used the net as a top while keeping her modesty. I bet the bag dress was the hardest thing to get fitting right.
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Thanks Tiger and Wolf.

Pickles, the falloff in some is intentional. I have 3 lights in that studio but sometimes I will use just one for the effect. Maybe the new concept should be a "Trash the Trash Dress" since wardrobe cost is $1.49 and a pair of scissors.

Thanks Greg. There were some that slipped but they would go in glamor.
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Maybe the new concept should be a "Trash the Trash Dress" since wardrobe cost is $1.49 and a pair of scissors.
Yeah, but you can spread the cost of the scissors over time so the shoots will become cheaper
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Yeah, but you can spread the cost of the scissors over time so the shoots will become cheaper
You're obviously a CPA.
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LOL, not by a longshot.
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Nice series.


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