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Old 09-29-2015   #1
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Pretty much done with the swimsuit summer project so it's time for fall fashion and outdoor concept work.

First up is returnee Kellie Snow. She's more musician than model (at 5'3" and not anorexic) but she has this incredible face and great energy.

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10. and she's a really great hood ornament. LOL


and, of course, a Bilsen set must end with the mandatory

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IMHO, photograph number 7 would benefit from photoshopping out the skull that's dangling between her legs from the top she's wearing.
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IMHO, photograph number 7 would benefit from photoshopping out the skull that's dangling between her legs from the top she's wearing.
Not a bad though sharp eyed one. Think I'll go back and do just that. Thanks.
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Was going to say the same thing Erich1B said, along with this. Not a bad first go round to transition form the summer bikini series. Oddly, maybe, but the 1st image might be my favorite. Seems more natural. Some of these seem posed, which is normal, so when I see something that seems to be natural, it works better. I like #6 a lot too, but it is tilted. You know me, but her shoes in 7 and 8 seem 1/2 size too small, but probably only when standing. The mandatory is pretty good. Eyes a bit dark and teeth a bit shadowed or something. It did show that even though one might want to give her a hug, you might not want to if you look at the clothing details...
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Nice series.
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A nice series of a beautiful model Steve.
Although I had not noticed it until Erich pointed it out the issue on shot #7 could use a bit of cloning.
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Nice set, and Number 8 is the winner for me Steve… In particular, I think the pose is flattering (although a bit of movement and it could easily have gone south).. a bit of playfulness on display and it tells the story of who she is. I too have a preference for things that look natural, so the spiky bra in the park doesn’t quite work for me.
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Thanks guys.

Kellie has a playfulness that comes through for me. I'll be posting an entirely different view of her today.

AS a side note, I'm surprised noboby objected to the railroad tracks in #1. LOL Not really. They are totally in the concept.
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Apart from the above mentions, it all works for me, Nice shoot!!!
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Thanks Tiger.
Kellie is a blast to work with.


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