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Old 05-01-2013   #1
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A girl in the wind.
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Old 05-01-2013   #2
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Nice shot except for the bright spot on the side of her face. I would lower the exposure to bring that brightness down, then use fill flash or reflector to bring the shadowed part of her face back to proper exposure.
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Beautiful model and image. Great smile and eyes, Agree about the shadow. Still nicely done. Have a great day.
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Nice shots. The hot spot on the side is what as it is. While it is objectionable to some it is life it happens in life we see it everyday. It sort of captures things just as they are in reality.
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Very good looking lady, but have to agree with neck/face light issue...
Also I believe had the ladies right hand been rotated by ninety degrees to the camera and semi closed showing the little finger slightly curled with maybe a slightly cocked back wrist too.. I believe would have looked a little more shall we say elegant/classy than the flat back of the hand which is being presented to the camera.(i.e. less mass)

But then, only an opinion...
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Nicely done.
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Nice picture!

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Nice shot, beautiful model and great detail!!!
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She's quite beautiful.

A few thoughts. If she is that square to the camera axis, maybe have her drop a shoulder? Otherwise, turn her 45 degrees or so to bring more depth.

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