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Old 03-07-2010   #1
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Hello everyone,

I'm new to Camel. There are some fantastic images and information on this site. I'm enjoying my time here. I'm looking to improve my photography so please give me some feedback, good or bad, both are welcome. I had a shoot last weekend with a really cute model. Here are a few samples from our sets.

Thanks in advance.
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Old 03-07-2010   #2
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Very pretty model. Like all but the second image the black net sleeves take away from the image in my opinion.
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Old 03-07-2010   #3
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Great model and very nice work by you!! On #4, I'm bothered by the hair across her neck and I think there should be some more space/separation between her right arm and body (and you might attempt to flatten her stomach a little bit in Photoshop too), but otherwise, I really like your style!! Keep it up!
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Old 03-07-2010   #4
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all are nice but the B&W is great, very soft. very sweet
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Old 03-08-2010   #5
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These are nice but I guess we're all "bothered" by something ... for me it is the line from her undergarment horizontal across her belly. Did you "haze up" all but the last? I like it on the first but not the rest.
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Old 03-08-2010   #6
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Thanks to everyone for the feedback so far, I truely appreciate it.

dwightmccann: the line across her belly? do you mean on the white dress shot? yes, i did use a softening technique on all the images, some at a higher opacity than others. i like a very soft skin look......

studio39: thanks for the comments. i do like the b&w shot the best also.

mjp: i agree with everything. she is a great model, a real sweetheart. nice eye catching the piece of hair. i totally missed it. should be easy to clone out. i had a fan blowing on her hair during that set, that one strand must have gotten loose. the space between her arm and body is def something that needs corrected in the next shoot. i'll make sure i tell her about it to improve her modeling as well.

forceofnature: i do agree, she's very pretty. as far as the black sleeves, her choice of wardrobe, i really don't have an opinion on it either way.

Thanks again everyone...
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#1 is my favorite. Gorgeous shot and processing. Well done.
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Old 03-08-2010   #8
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Thanks gjb. Seems to be the favorite of those I posted so far. I do agree with you.
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While they are all fantastic in my opinion, and while #1 is a stunner, I have to say i'm very partial to the last. Very natural look.. She's a beautiful model and you look to be a talented photographer. Welcome to the camel and thanks for sharing... Looking forward to some more
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#1 just blows the other ones away, very nice!!!


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