Second shoot with Edna

[hilltop]

I had the pleasure of doing another shoot with Edna. CC please.

[chickpiper]

She is a beautiful young lady. I think the background in this case draws to much attention to itself.

[Gna]

Originally Posted by hilltop

I had the pleasure of doing another shoot with Edna.

I'll say! That is one beautiful young lady! And you lit her very nicely too. But I agree with chickpiper that the background is too intrusive. That's easily remedied with some extra blurring and a tighter crop, off the top. Squaring the image. Would make it a more 'intimate' portrait too.

[hilltop]

Thanks for the input.

[gxgn]

I would like to see the eyes sharper but I'm not an expert.

[dmthompson]

Very good work. I would like to see more of her work.
Dwight

[hilltop]

Will be shooting with Edna again next week. We will see how it turns out. Thanks for all the helpful comments.

If anyone has a particular type of shot they would like to see, I am open to suggestions. She is always willing.

[alessandro]

I think better avoid similar cut on the arms. So i think with a cut on the bottom could even improve.

I think expression happy are more suited especially for young girl as her.

Very nice girl.