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Old 10-18-2008   #1 (permalink)
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Here is another shot of Alicia of some I did a while back. I am getting ready for another shoot with her and was looking at my past shots and really liked this one so I thought I would share it and get any thoughts on it.
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Nice image, very well lit. The only problem I have with it is the bright shoulder in the foreground with the huge veins takes my attention away from the face. I put my hand over the shoulder cropping it out and right away my attention is on the face where it should be.

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Nice image, very well lit. The only problem I have with it is the bright shoulder in the foreground with the huge veins takes my attention away from the face. I put my hand over the shoulder cropping it out and right away my attention is on the face where it should be.
Thank you, I had some concerns about the same thing but I was not sure if I should remove it or not. Thank you for the comments!!!
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Your exposure looks about perfect. The colors look nice together. I agree a different hand position would have made this even nicer.
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Your exposure looks about perfect. The colors look nice together. I agree a different hand position would have made this even nicer.
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