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Old 03-27-2008   #1
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Default Model: Angie- first time model

I did some of my first work with new lights and a model (finally). Angie was great to work with; moved how I told her, smiled when she should have. Now, tell me what I did wrong.





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Default Re: Model: Angie- first time model

I don't think you did that bad with the new lights. I think the pose in the first one seems a bit "off', but it isn't bad. The second one has a better pose, but it seems too wide of an image.

I'm sure others with more portrait abilities will comment and help get you to the last 10% or so of where you want to be....
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maybe I shoulda moved it to People. Not much help over here.


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