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Old 01-21-2006   #1
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One of the tasks the students had to do today was to work with one setup and wind and take different approaches to the one setup.



These are the example pictures I took before and after the students.
Please take not I took them within one minute (so little under 5 seconds per shot )



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Old 01-21-2006   #2
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Nice ones. The first one is really nice to me. Between it and the last one, it looks like a different person almost. Looks like the middle one was caught to early or too late. Maybe should ahve went with 6 secs per
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Yes 1 and 3 dose it for me 2 is not to my taste
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Really nice golden backdrop for nbr 1 and 3 and good posing. Nbr 2 is almost perfect if I could see a little more of the eyes and the upper teeth.
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I agree with above, the first and last ones are really nice. The first is probably my favorite but not by far because I like the intensity of the third one. I really like the lighting and the eye contact especially. The only criticism I'd make is that the yellow in the background is slightly too bright or not hidden behind the model enough and distracts from the subject. As above, I'd says that the second one looks like something is missing. I'd venture that it's movement: it looks like the model was moving, but the shutter speed froze it. Maybe a slower shutter speed that would add more blurring would have made that one better.
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are all your models from the neitherlands or do you also use models from Germany? I am located near Frankfurt and some of your models look familiar. Of course I'm no where near as good as you are..

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Normally they all are from the Netherlands.
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Number three

you are going to give CharlesU a run for his money - no offence Charles

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Old 03-03-2006   #9
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Hi,
Thanks so much.
Charles is a different photographer with a different approach, I love his work but it's different.
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Was there any type of release form required to post these images?


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