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Old 10-11-2007   #1
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Nice photo and love the lighting, but I would like to see the color in the models eyes a bit more. The back eye just seems a bit wierd.
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The lighting is causing a harsh neck shadow which detracts from the continuity of the photo. Hope it helps.
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It is oversharpened and you should definitely not sharpen fonts ... The lighting ratio is nice, but the shadows are not. The nose shadow is a little too strong in my opinion and I do not like the chaos on her neck, while the cheek looks very well.
It is somehow strange, it looks like a fashion image as the model does look away, but it does not show a lot cloth. Makes it interesting. And I would remove some of the wildest hair
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The lighting is causing a harsh neck shadow which detracts from the continuity of the photo. Hope it helps.
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It is oversharpened and you should definitely not sharpen fonts ... The lighting ratio is nice, but the shadows are not. The nose shadow is a little too strong in my opinion and I do not like the chaos on her neck, while the cheek looks very well.
It is somehow strange, it looks like a fashion image as the model does look away, but it does not show a lot cloth. Makes it interesting. And I would remove some of the wildest hair
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