Camilla again

[Jonas Thoresen]

took some pic's today.
and this one came out as the best one.
But couldn't decide if BW or color version was the best one.

any C&C anyone?

[rjones315]

You're having the same problem as me and it was pointed out that the background light is too overpowering.

[rastarocket]

noticed that overpowering in the back. but i think it looks good in the color version, though its a little strong on her face, toss the BW

[TIM]

Think the b&w will work if you set the black point.

[nrixeen]

Jonas,

you should move her further away from the BG also try adjusting levels some so it doesnt look as washed out as it is.

- <3 Ravn

[Unkl Buck]

What others said. Needs more contrast.

[TLV]

Way too much light from the back...killing the detail from the front.

[RickC]

The light is a bit high around her face. I also would have her position her face in such a way as to show more of her right eye - it appears cut off into her nose. I'm sure the model is beautiful, but I just can't see it in the shots provided.

[Jonas Thoresen]

thank's for commenting. i can see what you guys mean. (if any girls commenting. guys includes you to! )

tried to do what Ravn said and adjust a litle bit with levels.
i think it made the picture better, but as far as it could get better.
anyways.. let's hope i can do better on my next shot!

RickC: didn't actualy notice it before you said it.
but now i can see it. and the nose really cuts her eye.
thanks for telling me!

[JDArt]

Yipes. Looks like she just might use that thing.