More of Naj, enjoy! - PhotoCamel

MWPhoto · 07-21-2007

Model: Naj
MUA: EWArtistry
Photos by MWPhoto

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Mr. Pickles · 07-21-2007

All of them are pretty good. In the first, not liking the hair crossing her face at a downward diagonal by her nose to her shoulder. The light in the 2nd one seems ot grab too much attention. Third one is pretty good, but I'd darken the shoulder on the left side of the image to make it "go away".

All subtle...

MWPhoto · 07-21-2007

Hmm, I kind of liked the hair in the face, I thought they balanced out eachother, one up one down...I understand your pint though.
Well same thing in the second one, if you dont lookat the light, where do you look then?...just trying to get your eyes up a bit.

The last one, dont you thiong its good te get a definition of where she is? Im more worried about the arm/hand in the bottom left.

Mr. Pickles · 07-21-2007

You like the swear of hair on the right side, by her nose? If so, then that is all that matters.

I don't hate the light in the second one, but it grabs my eyes right off the bat. Don't know why I need to get my eyes "up a bit". If I was looking at the light, and raised them, I'd not be looking at the subject, right? The subject looks good in the image.

MWPhoto · 07-21-2007

No , you just misunderstood me, and I was trying to find a good reason to keep the light.
I mean, if the light would not be there, what would your eyes get drawn to first. For me the hair can be there or not, if all of you think I shall remove it I might do it.
Thanks much
Matt

Mr. Pickles · 07-21-2007

If the light wasn't there, I see her face first. I scroll the image to the top of the browser and just cut the light off and the image looks better to me.

But I am the only one to reply. Hopefully others will, because without replies, the site doesn't educate everyone as much

dc2 · 07-21-2007

The 1st would be my fave if it were not for the hair by the nose as it is the 2nd is my fave .

Dean Johnson · 07-23-2007

All-in-all, I think the photos are nicely done. And I really like her look.

I think #2 would be improved if that light was cropped off.

And in #3, she gets lost in the black bg.....no seperation...

kombizz · 07-23-2007

All are nice

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MWPhoto Vicuna Location: Stockholm, Sweden Posts: 137 CamelKarma: 50 Editing OK?: Ask first Gallery \| Blog	Re: More of Naj, enjoy! Hmm, I kind of liked the hair in the face, I thought they balanced out eachother, one up one down...I understand your pint though. Well same thing in the second one, if you dont lookat the light, where do you look then?...just trying to get your eyes up a bit. The last one, dont you thiong its good te get a definition of where she is? Im more worried about the arm/hand in the bottom left.
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Mr. Pickles Camel Breath Location: Old Folks Home Posts: 11,310 CamelKarma: 2448 Gallery \| Blog	Re: More of Naj, enjoy! You like the swear of hair on the right side, by her nose? If so, then that is all that matters. I don't hate the light in the second one, but it grabs my eyes right off the bat. Don't know why I need to get my eyes "up a bit". If I was looking at the light, and raised them, I'd not be looking at the subject, right? The subject looks good in the image.
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07-21-2007	#5 (permalink)
MWPhoto Vicuna Location: Stockholm, Sweden Posts: 137 CamelKarma: 50 Editing OK?: Ask first Gallery \| Blog	Re: More of Naj, enjoy! No , you just misunderstood me, and I was trying to find a good reason to keep the light. I mean, if the light would not be there, what would your eyes get drawn to first. For me the hair can be there or not, if all of you think I shall remove it I might do it. Thanks much Matt
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