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C&C is much appriciated.
Thanks 1. ![]() 2. ![]() 3. ![]() 4. ![]() 5. ![]() __________________
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Llama
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Very pretty model and the poses and costume are great. You have captured her skin tone and the soft mocca color. She has great body shape and her legs are awesome. Your photo work is great I see your talent in capturing the personality of a model a real advantage in making a good photograph. The only dig I have is the background which sets her dark skin and her clothing stand out it makes her look like she is floating in space and looks unnatural. This is just MHO I think placing her in such a way as to give prospective as where she is in relation to the floor. Again I like this series.
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Regarding the background and the lighting, I have to give full credit to Bobby Deal as he is the one who shared the lighting setup and edit tips with us in this forum. He prefers total white in the BG, I like it also so I made it so but I kept very minimal shadows to satisfy both opinioins (shadows/no shadows). I know that some think it is unnatural but I think it makes the subject pop even more. |
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Beautiful model and you did a great job on the lighting. Welcome to the world of the full frame. Sadly the hat kills these shots for me. It was great in theory but it is too small as as such it sits poorly on her head and simply looks wrong.
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Bobby Deal - Commercial Photographer MY SMUGMUG GALLERIES Studio Photography Lighting and Modeling Workshops "The only photographer we ought compare ourselves to is the one we used to be" "Woman is proof the God does not build in straight lines"Bobby Deal 2012 |
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.Regarding the hat, that is what we got and we tried our best. I need to take better attention on wardrobe next time. |
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On 2 and 3 I think I would have propped the gun up against her so it's more obvious what it is. None the less these are fine images and my suggestion is really a small thing.
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