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Old 06-25-2012   #1
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Not sure if this one qualifies to be posted on this forum, if it isn't please Mr. Moderator move it to the right forum.

C&C welcome and appreciated. Thanks.



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Nicely done William, the light angle and perspective of this shot are all wonderful. Make up is clean but effective, skin tone is smooth with a delightful blush to the cheek. Again nicely done the shot makes your model look graceful and elegant.
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I agree and think this one would convert to b/w beautifully.
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Beautiful model. Great processing. Well shot and nicely lit. I wish I could do as well.
Since Bobby scolded us for giving fly-by comments, I spent a bit of extra time looking at this shot. The background (to the camera's right) seems to have an uneven tone or something on it. There is a slight light line going across her neck right below her chin. I don't know if that was from retouching or some light reflection.
That's from looking at the shot for a good little bit, but seriously, beautiful shot! I'd give you double karma if I could.

BTW, Rain Lily almost always wants to see 'em in B&W.
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This is really a well done photograph. I like the lighting and the position of the model's head. It reminds me of a Cheseborough-Ponds advertisement back in the early 60's.
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A very well done shot. To me she looks like a beautiful well made flawless mannequin!!!
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I agree completely with heaterguy, and I'm old enough to remember those ads.

thcofer, I may be wrong but it looks to me that the line you see is the slight remnant of a crease in the neck skin being smoothed out. It is visible because the color doesn't perfectly match the surrounding area.

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Beautifully done! I agree with thcofer though regarding the weird patchyness of the background near the right side of her head.
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Thank you for the kind comments, I truly appreciate them. Now I need to replicate it with another model just to prove to myself that I can do this again and again.
I do see the patches on on models right side as noted by some of you, I guess I can clean that up a bit.
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A captivating shot. One can keep looking in anticipation that she will lift the gaze in a moment. Nice work.


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