Tam Portfolio

samerr9 · 06-01-2012

HI again..

These is another set of photosession.. C&C is much appriciated.

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Thanks

Bronze Age Man · 06-01-2012

Good set well lit. You could be a bit further from the background. I find the white cloth on the stool adds nothing but creases. In the second she seems about to fall off the stool but her balance and core strength are apparent in the other shots. Love to see her on a more photogenic stool!

samerr9 · 06-01-2012

I agree.. I realised that I meed to invest in some things for sutido shots like a nice stool.. But I wasnt creative enough to get something better than this at that time.. Any ideas?

Sailor Blue · 06-01-2012

There is that dangling ear ring showing behind the chin in #1 again.

Getting a real laugh is always a good thing, but now when your camera is looking up the model's nose. I recommend you don't use #4.

The other images look great.

Mister Sith · 06-01-2012

I recommend dodging the grey area on the edges of the first and last ones to make them pure white. I think they take away from the shot. Also, skin tones look a touch warm to me, maybe correcting that would work nicely. I also agree with Sailor Blue on the nose on 4. Otherwise great work!

yellowtiger · 06-01-2012

Good lighting, nice & bright & cheery!!!

samerr9 · 06-02-2012

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sailor Blue

There is that dangling ear ring showing behind the chin in #1 again.

Getting a real laugh is always a good thing, but now when your camera is looking up the model's nose. I recommend you don't use #4.

The other images look great.

Yeah you got the earring again

Agreed about the nose. But she was very happy with the expression so I gave it to her

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mister Sith

I recommend dodging the grey area on the edges of the first and last ones to make them pure white. I think they take away from the shot. Also, skin tones look a touch warm to me, maybe correcting that would work nicely. I also agree with Sailor Blue on the nose on 4. Otherwise great work!

I will take care of the white background next time.
The model was tanning for a while and she wanted that tan to show that is why they are warm.

Quote:

Originally Posted by yellowtiger

Good lighting, nice & bright & cheery!!!

Thank you all for comments and notes

06-01-2012	#2
Bronze Age Man Vicuna Location: London, Ontario Posts: 169 CamelKarma: 433 Editing OK?: Yes Gallery \| Blog	Re: Tam Portfolio - Set II Good set well lit. You could be a bit further from the background. I find the white cloth on the stool adds nothing but creases. In the second she seems about to fall off the stool but her balance and core strength are apparent in the other shots. Love to see her on a more photogenic stool!

06-01-2012	#3
samerr9 Llama Posts: 759 CamelKarma: 72017 Gallery \| Blog	Re: Tam Portfolio - Set II I agree.. I realised that I meed to invest in some things for sutido shots like a nice stool.. But I wasnt creative enough to get something better than this at that time.. Any ideas?

06-01-2012	#4
Sailor Blue F1 Camel Location: Bangkok, Thailand Posts: 3,487 CamelKarma: 71235 Editing OK?: Yes Gallery \| Blog	Re: Tam Portfolio - Set II There is that dangling ear ring showing behind the chin in #1 again. Getting a real laugh is always a good thing, but now when your camera is looking up the model's nose. I recommend you don't use #4. The other images look great.
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Mister Sith Vicuna Location: Cupertino, CA Posts: 197 CamelKarma: 8075 Editing OK?: Ask first Gallery \| Blog	Re: Tam Portfolio - Set II I recommend dodging the grey area on the edges of the first and last ones to make them pure white. I think they take away from the shot. Also, skin tones look a touch warm to me, maybe correcting that would work nicely. I also agree with Sailor Blue on the nose on 4. Otherwise great work!
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06-01-2012	#6
yellowtiger Bactrian Posts: 1,817 CamelKarma: 9121 Gallery \| Blog	Re: Tam Portfolio - Set II Good lighting, nice & bright & cheery!!!

06-01-2012	#1
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