Yzah

Toto Sayam · 03-10-2012

Hi Guys! Meet Yzah! She's a DJ in one of the local radio stations around here.
As usual C & C's are always welcome.

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thcofer · 03-10-2012

Beautiful lady. Your exposure & lighting look pretty good to me.
Think you could have had a better angle on #1 - her leg-hips are larger/closer than her head and pull the eye away from her face.
Her hands look tense in 4 & 5.

Sailor Blue · 03-10-2012

Nice looking model and nice images.

#2 & #3 are my favorites. The hands in #4 & #5 do need to be relaxed as thcofer said.

You might dodge the knee and burn in the face a bit in #1 to shift the focus to the face.

kgornia · 03-11-2012

1 and 2 are my favorite and if I had to pick I'd say 2 is the best one.
She's a gorgeous lady.

EricG · 03-12-2012

Very attractive young lady - the first three are my pick of the set; especially #3.

Toto Sayam · 03-13-2012

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Originally Posted by thcofer

Beautiful lady. Your exposure & lighting look pretty good to me.
Think you could have had a better angle on #1 - her leg-hips are larger/closer than her head and pull the eye away from her face.
Her hands look tense in 4 & 5.

For #1, I see what you mean. Maybe if I moved more to the left and have her look up at me a little would have given a much better angle.
For #4 & #5, I did see those. But only when I was viewing them in my laptop.
Still need to really focus on those small little details. Thanks again Tom. and for the Karma as well.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sailor Blue

Nice looking model and nice images.

#2 & #3 are my favorites. The hands in #4 & #5 do need to be relaxed as thcofer said.

You might dodge the knee and burn in the face a bit in #1 to shift the focus to the face.

I here you Sailor. At the time you could say I was too distracted to notice the hands.

On dodge and burning.. haven't really tried using those in any of my shots yet cause I still need to really learn how to use them.

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Originally Posted by kgornia

1 and 2 are my favorite and if I had to pick I'd say 2 is the best one.
She's a gorgeous lady.

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Originally Posted by EricG

Very attractive young lady - the first three are my pick of the set; especially #3.

Thanks kgornia and Eric. Yup she definitely is.

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