Patricia

Toto Sayam · 03-03-2012

Hi Guys! Meet Patricia. This was our 2ndth time together.

Feel free to leave a comment or a critique. It is always appreciated. Thanks!

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thcofer · 03-03-2012

Nice. Think I like #2 more. The arch she has going on in #1 makes my back hurt.

Beautiful young lady.

Chief7 · 03-03-2012

Nice shots. When looking at her, I'm drawn to the make-up under her eyes.

Bilsen · 03-03-2012

Pretty girl.

I prefer #1. For some reason her eyes look strange to me in 2.

keithdewey3 · 03-03-2012

Nice shots. She really knows how to pose. I like the 1st shot best. I agree with John about her eyes in the second one. Must be something going on with her makeup and the light.

Sailor Blue · 03-03-2012

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Originally Posted by JohnGalt_ny

Pretty girl.

I prefer #1. For some reason her eyes look strange to me in 2.

Steve, it is a style of eye makeup that uses a shiny silver/white streak below the lower eyelashes. Here is an example from one of my images.

Mavin · 03-04-2012

Very nice

patterfr · 03-04-2012

I think these are great!
Nice lighting and posing.
Beautiful.

Rain Lily · 03-04-2012

Love the lighting in #2 but I think the poses look awkward, in both of them. #1, the arch seems to her 'trying too hard' and #2, the arm on the wall looks tense while the farther hand on the upraised leg looks more relaxed - sort of throws the image out of balance, imo.

Toto Sayam · 03-08-2012

Quote:

Originally Posted by thcofer

Nice. Think I like #2 more. The arch she has going on in #1 makes my back hurt.

Beautiful young lady.

Thanks Tom. Indeed she is! Can't help but stare at her during the shoot without the cam on my face and ofcourse without her noticing.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Chief7

Nice shots. When looking at her, I'm drawn to the make-up under her eyes.

Thanks. Yeah you are right. Not that prominent in the 1st pic though.
The 2nd was with a fill from an on cam bare ext flash.

Quote:

Originally Posted by JohnGalt_ny

Pretty girl.

I prefer #1. For some reason her eyes look strange to me in 2.

Thanks John! Thats why I'm planning another shoot with her.

Quote:

Originally Posted by keithdewey3

Nice shots. She really knows how to pose. I like the 1st shot best. I agree with John about her eyes in the second one. Must be something going on with her makeup and the light.

Thanks Keith. Yeah. She has improved from when we did our first shoot. Hopefully I did too.

About the eyes.. the 1st was shot with an 80x120cm softbox and the 2nd was with an on cam bare ext flash just for fill. So that's why.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mavin

Very nice

Thanks Marvin.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sailor Blue

Steve, it is a style of eye makeup that uses a shiny silver/white streak below the lower eyelashes. Here is an example from one of my images.

Thanks for droppin by sailor.

Quote:

Originally Posted by patterfr

I think these are great!
Nice lighting and posing.
Beautiful.

I'm glad you think so Fran!

Yup. She definitely is.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Rain Lily

Love the lighting in #2 but I think the poses look awkward, in both of them. #1, the arch seems to her 'trying too hard' and #2, the arm on the wall looks tense while the farther hand on the upraised leg looks more relaxed - sort of throws the image out of balance, imo.

Thanks for taking the time Rain. I do get the feeling that something was indeed off when I was looking at the finished pic but wasn't able to really figure it out. Thanks again for that comment. Hopefully I learn to pick those out during an actual shoot and not when I'm looking at them from my monitor. So.. more shooting practice. Yey for me!

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thcofer Photocamel Master Location: Fredericktown, MO Posts: 7,135 CamelKarma: 8029566 Editing OK?: Yes Gallery \| Blog	Re: Patricia Nice. Think I like #2 more. The arch she has going on in #1 makes my back hurt. Beautiful young lady.
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Chief7 Guanaco Posts: 279 CamelKarma: 2561 Gallery \| Blog	Re: Patricia Nice shots. When looking at her, I'm drawn to the make-up under her eyes.

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keithdewey3 PhotoCamel Supporter F1 Camel Location: Missouri Posts: 3,209 CamelKarma: 73979 Editing OK?: Yes Gallery \| Blog	Re: Patricia Nice shots. She really knows how to pose. I like the 1st shot best. I agree with John about her eyes in the second one. Must be something going on with her makeup and the light.
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03-04-2012	#7
Mavin Guanaco Location: Portland, Oregon Posts: 341 CamelKarma: 191 Gallery \| Blog	Re: Patricia Very nice

03-03-2012	#1
Toto Sayam Alpaca Posts: 40 CamelKarma: 2108 Gallery \| Blog	Patricia Hi Guys! Meet Patricia. This was our 2ndth time together. Feel free to leave a comment or a critique. It is always appreciated. Thanks! 1. 2. __________________ Members don't see ads in threads. Register your free account today and become a member of PhotoCamel to open up the site's many benefits and features.

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patterfr Camel Breath Location: New Jersey Posts: 13,527 CamelKarma: 426053 Editing OK?: Yes Gallery \| Blog	Re: Patricia I think these are great! Nice lighting and posing. Beautiful.
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03-04-2012	#9
Rain Lily Camel Breath Location: Louisiana Posts: 21,762 CamelKarma: 1373318 Editing OK?: Yes Gallery \| Blog	Re: Patricia Love the lighting in #2 but I think the poses look awkward, in both of them. #1, the arch seems to her 'trying too hard' and #2, the arm on the wall looks tense while the farther hand on the upraised leg looks more relaxed - sort of throws the image out of balance, imo.
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