Rebekah Lynn

[Jasper Ash]

Hello, all. Here's my second attempt a model-style photography. We went for a pinup style shoot. What do you guys think? Please share your constructive criticism. It's what I need to get better!

Shots were taken in a low-light room with a black backdrop using only one on camera speedlight.







-Jasper

[DanInSoCal]

Very nice, but make sure you do the same skin treatment on the legs that you do on the face and chest.

I love 2 & 3 -- very playfully sexy but tasteful. 3 is a little underexposed IMO.

Regards,
Dan

[Jasper Ash]

Thanks, Dan. I'm going to apply that CC to the next photo in the set. I've got a few more to upload I just haven't gotten around to it. Hopefully soon, though. Thanks again!

[SnappyPhoto_man]

I not a fan of the of Burning around the model to black out the background.

[Jasper Ash]

The shots were mostly dark in the background before the burning due to the fact that we shot in a very dark room and used a black backdrop. This is new to me and I quite like it. I can definitely see how I can play it out, though.

Heres a couple more - and one with a little more over PP just for fun:

[AG34]

I really like these & I think you've done great with the speedlite. Fab series. Deserving of K! Great posing & model. Clearly fun stuff. Excellent appeals to me!
I notice you spell photography wrong in your copyright mark - a conversarion starter, eh? Clever!!

[Jasper Ash]

LOL! I didn't even notice that. Neither did anyone else. Good catch! Maybe I'll roll with the misspelled word.

Thanks for the comments, too!