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Old 02-02-2016   #1
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These are a couple shots for an online seminar. Thoughts?




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Old 02-02-2016   #2
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I like the first one a lot although I think the cap should also be in focus and the lipstick rotated CC just a bit to center the Loreal logo. The second one I'm not so sure about the shop rag and wrenches as props and the black background just seems to make the shot look unfinished.
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I agree.
There's a bit of a disconnect between a feminine product and tools.
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Thanks guys. I appreciate the comments.

Brooks, you're right, the lipstick should have been rotate a tiny bit to camera right. Thanks.


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