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Old 04-16-2009   #1
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Default Aloe dichotoma

Hello folks,

I have never attempted BAW and have decided to take the plunge. Attached is a photo of the trunk of Aloe dichotoma, a desert plant from the Namaqualand and shot in the Kirstenbosch Botanical Garden a few weeks ago. I would appreciate C and C.

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cool shot like the texture
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I to like the texture. I played with it in ACR and liked it more with blacks increased to 10 and clarity set to 75.
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I love the texture, but the background kind of blends with the plant. You may want to play with the contrasts a bit.
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Contrast is definitely lacking, as has been mentioned .
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almost an abstract. I would focus more on the plant itself in order to circumpass the gap looking out on the background. Try some more captures.


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