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Old 11-23-2017   #1
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The background is a bit distracting but the light on your dancer's face is excellent.
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The background is a bit distracting but the light on your dancer's face is excellent.
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If the foreground dancer is in paradise, her expression shows she isn't really feeling it at the moment. This image looks as if it would be quite colorful and I would like to see it in color, if possible. If the colors of the headdresses and the background contrast, putting the image in color might help separate the dancers from the background.
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A second for seeing this photo in color.
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If the foreground dancer is in paradise, her expression shows she isn't really feeling it at the moment. This image looks as if it would be quite colorful and I would like to see it in color, if possible. If the colors of the headdresses and the background contrast, putting the image in color might help separate the dancers from the background.
I'll post a color version, thanks for commenting.
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A second for seeing this photo in color.
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Here is the color version.
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shadowman, I really like the bold colors in this image. I much prefer the color over the b&W. Have some karma for this one!
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shadowman, I really like the bold colors in this image. I much prefer the color over the b&W. Have some karma for this one!
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