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Old 03-09-2008   #1
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Old 03-09-2008   #2
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Good work.Is this a composite of three or a single shot.
the edit looks good nice warm tones and good saturation.Did you do some shadow work?
I would select the top bird and use a high pass sharpen on it ,looks soft compared to the other two.
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Hi David, Yes your correct, its three shots merged. I do agree with your comments, I will try again to re-edit and improve the top bird.
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Your colors looks good
you got to play a litle with the DOF
The birds are to close together, and if you had to focus on the closest one the other 2 they will be a litle blurry because of the DOF
I thing it looks unnatural to me
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Your colors looks good
you got to play a litle with the DOF
The birds are to close together, and if you had to focus on the closest one the other 2 they will be a litle blurry because of the DOF
I thing it looks unnatural to me
There not from a single shot Emmanuel.
Its a collage done with three seprate birds.
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Hi Epphoto, thanks for your point of view.
Hi David thanks for comment and help
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I really like this composite. It reminds me of something that would be seen in an Audubon book.
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I have hard time catching swallows on my camera. I agree with the unatural look of two being not in focus so close together.
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There not from a single shot Emmanuel.
Its a collage done with three seprate birds.
Yes i know
That's why i talk him it looks unreal If you have all the birds in focus
You got to play with DOF ( i meant blurriness on PS)


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