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Old 06-29-2006   #1 (permalink)
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Hi, folks...* got this one when i was clearing up some old stuff... It ain't the toast of the pics, but the bird crossing the sky plus the derelict part of an old train station made me do it what I did... got it?

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isnt that bad, is it ?!?
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Look good , I reckon if you chop almost the top half off it will draw more attention to the bird , otherwise a nice mood .
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Not bad at all.... Nice strong angular composition. This would be a good candidate for a composite. I would hunt around for something to place in the upper lefthand of the frame to balance it out a bit.
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Old 07-01-2006   #5 (permalink)
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Not bad at all.... Nice strong angular composition. This would be a good candidate for a composite. I would hunt around for something to place in the upper lefthand of the frame to balance it out a bit.
Good point indeed. Since the beginning the pic gave me that impression... It's a sort of Gold Rule in composition.

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Marcelo,
You've got it almost:
I would crop a bit from the left side, so that the part of of the station is going from topright to bottomleft.
To focus on the bird I would use photoshop to clear out the two pillars.
I really like the strong colors!

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