Sonata in yellow - PhotoCamel

habakuk · 09-17-2009

(click > zoom)

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AncientSnapper · 09-25-2009

I like it - but would crop out the angled ones on the right - you have a good eye

Rense · 09-27-2009

yep, leave out the the slanted ones.

mario · 09-27-2009

I think that cropping out the ones on the right would help this too. I'd wonder about cropping it as square as possible, too. I think that might help to emphasize the pattern created by the scraped paint - which reminds me of notes falling in a scale. I like it.

habakuk · 09-27-2009

Thanks much for the valuable comments! However, in my way of reading this scene, I don't agree, for a crop would throw out the balance and the slanted lines are kind of the closing brackets of the sonata...

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jellybean · 09-28-2009

I like it. When we critique an image it is sometimes helpful if we think about what the photographer had in mind. IMHO it would be difficult to know where to crop the slanted posts due to whatever it is that's between them and the first upright post; so I'm not convinced a crop is needed.

_alpha_ · 10-08-2009

interesting image.

habakuk · 10-17-2009

Thanks. It's always interesting to hear different analysis of such a scene. I can learn a lot from asking me which one I share/prefer and why.

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09-17-2009	#1
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09-25-2009	#2
AncientSnapper Vicuna Location: UK Posts: 195 CamelKarma: 188 Editing OK?: Yes Gallery \| Blog	Re: Sonata in yellow I like it - but would crop out the angled ones on the right - you have a good eye
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09-27-2009	#4
mario Vicuna Location: Ottawa Region, Canada Posts: 55 CamelKarma: 255 Editing OK?: Yes Gallery \| Blog	Re: Sonata in yellow I think that cropping out the ones on the right would help this too. I'd wonder about cropping it as square as possible, too. I think that might help to emphasize the pattern created by the scraped paint - which reminds me of notes falling in a scale. I like it.

09-27-2009	#5
habakuk Dromedary Location: :noitacoL Posts: 1,143 CamelKarma: 4580 Editing OK?: Ask first Gallery \| Blog	Re: Sonata in yellow Thanks much for the valuable comments! However, in my way of reading this scene, I don't agree, for a crop would throw out the balance and the slanted lines are kind of the closing brackets of the sonata... cheers ®
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09-28-2009	#6
jellybean Alpaca Posts: 45 CamelKarma: 73 Gallery \| Blog	Re: Sonata in yellow I like it. When we critique an image it is sometimes helpful if we think about what the photographer had in mind. IMHO it would be difficult to know where to crop the slanted posts due to whatever it is that's between them and the first upright post; so I'm not convinced a crop is needed.

10-08-2009	#7
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10-17-2009	#8
habakuk Dromedary Location: :noitacoL Posts: 1,143 CamelKarma: 4580 Editing OK?: Ask first Gallery \| Blog	Re: Sonata in yellow Thanks. It's always interesting to hear different analysis of such a scene. I can learn a lot from asking me which one I share/prefer and why. cheers ® __________________ Members don't see ads in threads. Register your free account today and become a member on PhotoCamel - Your Friendly Photo Forum, gaining access to posting privileges, contests, free plug-ins and other downloads, unlimited online storage for your photographs, reviews, free marketplace listings, and much more.
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