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Old 01-05-2009   #1
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Default First attempt at smoke

Smoke seemed like a cool subject, and I tried it for the first time, C&C welcomed

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Old 01-05-2009   #2
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Nice first try. You got some cool patterns. Try a levels adjustment to bring out the blacks. It will make the smoke stand out more
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Old 01-06-2009   #3
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Something like this? (this is the first time I've played around with the levels adjustments in photoshop)

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(I didn't like how the last one came out, it was hard to get a good balance on that one).

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Yes! That's exactly right. Well done. You can change the color of the smoke using the gradient map. ==Add a gradient map adjustment layer and switch the mode to overlay or softlight for example, and you can get some neat colors.
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maybe try a bit more sharpening?
and, try using a flashlight to get the smoke into focus (use manual focus and a smaller aperture)
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Thank you all for the comments and help. Aperture is confusing to me, if I recall correctly a smaller (less light) aperture has a higher number right? (the f number?)
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yup...smaller f = less light, and greater depth of field (or is it deeper?)...anyway, it will help you in having most of the smoke in focus. but, beware that smaller f needs more flash power, so, you'll eighter have to increase the flash power if you shoot your flash on manual, if you shoot on e-ttl (i-ttl for nikon), that adjustment will be made automatically.
well...i'm not an expert in shooting smoke (did it only once...), but what i've told you seem to be make sense for me...

well, hope to see more pictures!

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you're off to a good start with it. The ones that have the black point set look good.


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