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Old 08-23-2005   #5 (permalink)
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Default Re: Pathway in the sand

I like the second shot the best of the two. Has nice lines to it and the all over gritty sort of feeling to it works. You sort of don't know if it is film noise or sand and the thought it could be sand blowing or something makes it feel more desolate. I think it was a good idea to do the red cast on the building and the neutral on the rocks on your first picture. For me, I think I'd rather the building be less or more clear...where it is at my eyes sort of water a bit trying to focus on it and it is hard to drag my eyes down to the interesting rocks. That's why I like the second shot better...not as much struggle for me to sit and study.

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